Constructive feedback

[Aviar]

Here is a graphic I put together but I am not happy with the Font. I am looking for someone who knows about photoshop to give me some feedback on how I could improve on this.

[Paul1337noob]

I always like to add a border to images.
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/7...derstutsa9.jpg

Putting text in the middle is kinda Cookie cutter, Always on posters and Seen in almost all text documents and presentations, and it looks Naab IMO
try thinking of the rules of thirds, a bit like photography

See how the text in my my sig is at the bottom off to the right
http://files.uploadffs.com/a/d06baf84/3rds.jpg

[Fattness]

I will state what I like about it. The way you used the lightning and the shamans, I like the phrase but like Paul said, not in the middle of the screen. I would do something like put the shamans in the middle maybe standing on one of those floating islands you see in Outland..like in Nagarand and then do the first part of your saying at the top and then maybe rap the bottom with the last half. Just my 2 cents.

[LindlineOLD]

The question I have is to what end you're planning to use this image? That'll help you with size and layout a bit and then you can work on the polish.